Saturday, September 20, 2008

Fiction

A BAD KING:
A Dark Tale of Redemption versus Fatalism

By Lochlan DORRELL, age three
(As told to Casey DORRELL)

A Bad King is going to bash a sidewalk.
The sidewalk falls apart. The bad king goes home.
He plays and stuff.

The King goes back and there wasn't a sidewalk.
The people can't walk so they walk on the road.

The king goes back again and he fixes up the sidewalk.
The people say "thank you".

Then a pirate comes. The pirate is bad.
He bashes the sidewalk. He doesn't fix it.
The people can't walk so they walk on the road.

A car drives over the people.

The End.

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